Hi Jae! I really liked your portfolio! I decided to comment this as my random free choice but overall your stories of Kaikeyi and Sur (I'm just going to type her short name because I don't remember the spelling) were very interesting! I thought these two characters were fun to read about because well they are just so evil! I especially liked how you made Sur's story into a diary of how much she is infatuated with Rama! Although in Kaikeyi's story I felt like you may have went overboard with all the commas. Watch out for all the commas! Start a new sentence if you have to... I had the same problem. Other than that I really enjoyed reading your stories. I did a portfolio as well because I don't think I can create a storybook with just one topic. I think portfolios are a lot easier. Also I just want to comment on your lovely layout! I'm digging the lights in the background. It kind of reminds me of that Disney movie Tangle haha. Anyways good job on your portfolio! Keep up the good work!
Hi, Jae! I’m commenting on your wall about the design/layout of your blog. I really like the simplicity of your blog and how easy it is to navigate through the various tabs you have. The colors are also very soft to the eye and I really like that. The lavender/pinkish color on here is very nice and soft to look at.
Hey girl! I’ve come to comment on your wall since you commented on mine! I really love your color scheme! The lights are so pretty against the pinks! It has been a while since I’ve read one of your stories, so I will be sure to do that for an extra credit here in the future. I look forward to reading some of your posts!
Hey Jae! I've already commented on some of your portfolio stories so I thought I'd comment on here for a change! :D I just want to start off with your background! The wallpaper is so cute, I love pictures of unfocused lights so your profile drew me in at once. The whole color scheme is great and beautiful. Also I already commented on your story about Rama and Sita where they were separated but just want to say that I really liked it! That scene was one that a lot of people wrote about and I'm glad they did because I loved it and I loved reading every person's story and perspective on that scene! I will agree with an earlier comment about the commas, I also have that problem. Pretty sure I've made several mistakes with commas in this comment as well. :D
Aside from that, great job! Keep up the good work!
Hi Jae! I really liked your portfolio! I decided to comment this as my random free choice but overall your stories of Kaikeyi and Sur (I'm just going to type her short name because I don't remember the spelling) were very interesting! I thought these two characters were fun to read about because well they are just so evil! I especially liked how you made Sur's story into a diary of how much she is infatuated with Rama! Although in Kaikeyi's story I felt like you may have went overboard with all the commas. Watch out for all the commas! Start a new sentence if you have to... I had the same problem. Other than that I really enjoyed reading your stories. I did a portfolio as well because I don't think I can create a storybook with just one topic. I think portfolios are a lot easier. Also I just want to comment on your lovely layout! I'm digging the lights in the background. It kind of reminds me of that Disney movie Tangle haha. Anyways good job on your portfolio! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi, Jae! I’m commenting on your wall about the design/layout of your blog. I really like the simplicity of your blog and how easy it is to navigate through the various tabs you have. The colors are also very soft to the eye and I really like that. The lavender/pinkish color on here is very nice and soft to look at.
ReplyDeleteHey girl! I’ve come to comment on your wall since you commented on mine! I really love your color scheme! The lights are so pretty against the pinks! It has been a while since I’ve read one of your stories, so I will be sure to do that for an extra credit here in the future. I look forward to reading some of your posts!
ReplyDeleteHey Jae! I've already commented on some of your portfolio stories so I thought I'd comment on here for a change! :D I just want to start off with your background! The wallpaper is so cute, I love pictures of unfocused lights so your profile drew me in at once. The whole color scheme is great and beautiful. Also I already commented on your story about Rama and Sita where they were separated but just want to say that I really liked it! That scene was one that a lot of people wrote about and I'm glad they did because I loved it and I loved reading every person's story and perspective on that scene! I will agree with an earlier comment about the commas, I also have that problem. Pretty sure I've made several mistakes with commas in this comment as well. :D
ReplyDeleteAside from that, great job! Keep up the good work!